Nowadays people have much easier access to the Internet. Things become quite

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问题    Nowadays people have much easier access to the Internet. Things become quite different: many jobs can be done much more efficiently and many ways of entertainment are created. On the other hand... there are also increasing worries about the negative effects of the Internet, especially on young students. Do the benefits of the Internet for students outweigh the potential harm, or it is the other way round?
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   The Effects of the Internet on Students
   You are to write in three parts:
   In the first part, state your position.
   In the second part, support your views with one or two reasons.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案                           The Effects of the Internet on Students
     It seems that life has become easier and more interesting with the appearance of the Internet. On the Internet, many jobs can be done much more efficiently and many ways of entertainment are created. On the other hand, concerns about the effects of the Internet on students are going. Thought it cannot be denied that there are positive ones, much harm can be done to the students.
     First, many students like to play games on the Internet. Some of them even indulge themselves in it and play truant just to play games. This obviously does no good to their study.
     Second, most students are not old or wise enough to tell right from wrong. Driven by curiosity, some of them may enter websites which are not suitable for them.
     Last but not least, when using the Internet, students only have to type into the computer. When they make mistakes, the computer reminds them and makes corrections for them. As a result, when the students are required to write on paper, they ignore the mistakes easily, which surely is no good habit at all.
     Based on the reasons mentioned above, I do believe that parents and teachers should guide the students in their use of the Internet so as to minimize its negative effects.

解析 明确题目要求。Unit Three考题中的“the effects of the Internet”,“Students”为本题的关键词,考生在构思文章的时候要明确两点:一、网络的影响,二、影响的对象是学生。
选择写作角度。Unit Three作文题目为:网络对学生的影响。谈到网络对学生的影响,考生既可以谈正面影响,也可以谈负面影响,也可以两方面都兼顾。在文章展开的过程中,考生可以根据自己的知识、经验和推理来陈述、解释、支持自己的观点。
组织语言结构。专业四级作文的判分采取的是整体评分的原则,全方位客观评判写作答题的总体质量,而不是去注意小错误和单一弱点。即:就文章的总体印象给分及奖励分,而不是按语言要素的错误数目扣分。评判的重点在于考生是否利用已掌握的语言有效地传达思想和把控思想的展开进程。考生在进行写作训练时必须一切以交际目标的实现为出发点和终极目标,在篇章水平上(而非仅在遣词造句和段落上)表现自己真实的语言技能。
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