The Ministry of Education has urged teachers across the country to avoid accepti

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问题 The Ministry of Education has urged teachers across the country to avoid accepting gifts from students or their parents on the occasion of Teachers’ Day. This has led to a heated debate as to whether gifts should be banned on Teachers’ Day.
Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic :
Should Gifts be Banned on Teachers’ Day?
You are to -write in three parts.
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization , grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案               Should Gifts be Banned on Teachers’ Day?
    Teachers’ Day is a good opportunity to express our gratitude to the hard work of respected teachers, but is sending gifts to teachers the only way to show our gratitude? I should say no to gifts!
    Above all, gifts are good and attractive and seemingly they can make a deep impression on our teachers, however, this certainly will not be very helpful to our study and teachers’ teaching because teachers’ contribution to our learning absolutely does not depend on offering them gifts but on their gifts of language teaching and their morality of dedication. Besides, traditionally we didn’t express our gratitude to our teachers only by sending gifts, so it should not be promoted to send gifts to teachers. In this modem would given the present situation in China where anti-corruption campaign becomes increasingly severe, the prohibition of gifts for teachers might be another seemingly good measure to set a good example to struggle against corruption in other fields in addition to education.
    Everyone should have gratitude, and everyone should receive gratitude. The problem is how to express our gratitude to our beloved teachers. One way in my mind can be to make a phone call to them telling them how they have been helpful to our study because gratitude needs to be expressed verbally other than sending gifts. Such simple but sincere behavior, I think, can leave a ever deeper impression on our teachers.

解析     这则话题比较新颖,属于有话可说,但是要写出有深度的文章还是有一定难度的。教师节是感恩的一种方式,但是感恩和送礼并没有必然联系。第一段表明自己的观点:教师节应该拒绝送礼。第二段可采用并列或者递进的方式陈述自己的观点。这些观点可以是:送礼好,又诱人,看似能给教师们留下深刻印象,但是并不会有助于我们的学习和教师的教学,因为教师对学习的贡献完全不是因为别人给礼物,而是教学的能力和奉献精神;在过去,感恩教师,送礼不是惟一方法,现在也不应提倡;目前国内反腐斗争严峻,禁止教师收礼似乎能起到示范作用,能很好地开展教育领域以外的反腐。最后,深化主题:每个人都应该学会感恩,每个人都应该接受感恩。问题的关键是:如何感谢我们的老师。其中一种简单的方法就是过年过节打个电话,感谢老师对我们的帮助。这个方法表明,感恩更需要言语表达而不是送礼,这种方法简单而真诚,会给教师们留下深刻印象。
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