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问题    Mobile phone makes it so easy to reach out and touch someone that it has become a necessity for many people. It brings much convenience and communication efficiency. But at the same time it is criticized for its negative effects. What is your opinion?
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                                      On Mobile Phone
   You are to write in three parts.
   In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
   In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案                                             On Mobile Phone
     Nowadays, people cannot work or study without communication. Mobile phone, developed on the basis of modern technology, is speeding up communication immensely and bringing us much convenience. But at the same time, it is blamed for doing harm to people’s health. Some researchers argue that the low-power microwave radiation might lead to brain tumors, cancer, high blood pressure and memory loss. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of mobile phone outweigh its disadvantages.
       First of all, mobile phone has all the advantages of telephone, If you want to get an immediate connection, it is obviously quicker to phone someone rather than to write a letter or send an E-mail. And it is by telephoning that you can obtain immediate response and timely information. Secondly, mobile phone offers a very good way to convey personal feelings. On the phone you can hear the voice on the other end and have your own voice heard, thus you can feel much closer to each other. Thirdly, mobile phone is characterized by its portable convenience. You can take and use it almost wherever you go. What’s more, with the support of net system, you can do many other things with this technology-involved device. For example, you can send short messages, take photo pictures and even get access to the information on-line.
     All in all, despite some possible negative effects, mobile phone does more good than harm to us. What we need to do is to make use of the further advance of technology and make it bring more benefits to our life.
解析     题目要求对手机发表自己的见解，在正式写作之前想清楚自己的立场，并简单地就题目要求列出提纲。在第一段中，简单地阐述手机在现代生活中的作用，并提出自己的论点；第二段从三个方面论述论点；第三段进行一个简要的总结。
   第一段可以用一句话表明自己的观点，然后在第二段中进行详细论证。论证可以用列举法进行，注意一些信号词的使用，比如hrstly，secondly，thirdly等。这些词的使用可以使文章脉络清晰，更好地阐述道理。在运用列举法进行阐述的时候，注意将每一点内容用一个句子概述出来，然后用三到四个句子进行扩展，这样也使文章结构比较清楚。第三段对手机的看法进行—个简要的总结，强调文章的观点。
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