Recently a newspaper has reported that salaries for college graduates are equ

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问题    Recently a newspaper has reported that salaries for college graduates are equivalent to wages for migrant workers. Apparently this comparison is too simple and superficial. However, job-hunting is much more difficult for college graduates but may be easier for migrant workers. What’s your opinion?
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   The Main Factors Influencing Salaries for College Graduates Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案    The Main Factors Influencing Salaries for College Graduates
   Recently, salaries for college graduates are very low, and there has been a heated argument about whether they should have higher salaries. Some people are for it; however, others are against it. As for me, I think we should view this problem rationally. Salaries for college graduates depend on many factors, and the main factors come from themselves.
   First of all, most graduates don’t master the professional skills. Their focus of attention at university was on passing various exams. Still, others are obsessed with surfing the Internet and seldom attend regular classes. Anyway, being unskilled in their speciality is the most important factor influencing their salaries. Secondly, many students overestimate themselves. Some college graduates think that they are superior to others and they always prefer higher salaries. But the fact is that they learn a lot of theoretical knowledge which they cannot apply well into practice. Finally, the variety and limitation in majors have an effect on salaries. Different fields promise different levels of salary in a short term.
   In conclusion, three main factors influence college graduates’ salaries, including professional skills, self-evaluation and majors, hence college graduates should treat their salaries much more rationally.

解析    开头部分
   本文首先提出问题,阐述两种对立的观点,之后表明自己的观点:大学毕业生的薪水由很多影响因素决定,尤其是自身的因素,要理性对待。
   中间部分
   运用First of all,…Secondly,…和Finally,…从三个方面阐述学生自身的主要因素,包括专业技能方面、自我评估方面及专业的不同。并对每一方面进行了具体阐述。论证充分,合情合理。
   结尾部分
   总结影响大学毕业生薪水的三个主要因素,并且呼吁大学生理性对待薪水问题。
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