Burdened with great working pressure, people nowadays even don’t have much ti

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问题    Burdened with great working pressure, people nowadays even don’t have much time to dine with their parents. This has increasingly been a severe social problem. Look at the following picture carefully and write an essay in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture and give your view on the issue.
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案                  The Best Present for Parents: the Kid’s Company
   In the picture, an elderly couple is at the dinner table, which is filled with nice food. But their children are not present. Instead, they send various presents to compensate their absence. This picture vividly illustrates the loneliness many parents experience and calls on us to spend more quality time with our parents.
   We should realize that being with our parents means more to them than giving them gifts only. First, love is hard to be bought by money or traded with gifts. Gifts, though as a token of children’s love, resemble one another. But the chatting, sharing and laughing with parents are unique and could not be substituted by the run-of-mill gifts. Second, accompanying parents could bring a strong sense of satisfaction and joy to them. Gifts are material comfort, while quality time is the spiritual one. As the renowned psychologist Maslow pointed out, the latter is superior to the former. This is especially true for parents who are longing for reunion with their children.
   In conclusion, parents enjoy their kids’ company and no gift can replace quality time.

解析    这幅图片刻画了一对老年夫妇孤独吃团年饭的情景,孩子们送来了礼物,人却未能到场。可见,儿女的陪伴比物质的慰问更重要。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
   第一段描绘图片,指出图片的意图:呼吁孩子们花更多时间陪伴父母。
   第二段提出个人看法:陪在父母身边比送他们礼物更重要。其一,金钱或礼物难以换来爱。与父母共聚的感觉是独特的,无法用礼物替代。其二,陪伴在父母身边能为他们带来满足感,以心理学家马斯洛的需要层次理论为佐证。
   第三段总结全文:没有任何礼物可以替代孩子与父母的相聚。
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