Recently, more and more food scandals such as poisonous milk power and illeg

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问题     Recently, more and more food scandals such as poisonous milk power and illegal cooking oil are exposed to the public. What makes food unsafe? How to deal with it? These questions have aroused enormous public concern. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
    On Food Safety
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     On Food Safety
    Food safety is such a serious issue that depresses many parents, who swarm into Hong Kong to purchase milk powders. When the supply in the local market is drained, the government puts a quota on milk powders taken out of the region. To restore the confidence of mainland buyers, I think we should strengthen the law enforcement of government bodies.
    The reason why enterprises in the Chinese mainland dare to put their profits before public health is because of the inaction of the authorities concerned. For instance, inspection department is supposed to authorize regular and irregular checks on the food products, but this is hardly the case in many cities. As the saying goes, "when the cat is away, mice will play". That’s why we see so many kinds of unsafe food in our market. Watchdog departments should be more active to launch raids into the manufacturing sites and perform more frequent tests on food pro-ducts. Once problems are identified, the public shall be warned about the potential threats of a food product and the enterprise concerned shall be punished according to law. With a firm grip from the law enforcement agencies, enterprises must behave themselves.
    In conclusion, we should strengthen law enforcement to solve the food safety issue in China.

解析     本题属于“自由发挥型”作文。涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“食品安全”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从香港奶粉限购人题,指出应该加强政府机构的执法力度来解决食品安全问题。
    第二段:阐述原因。首先,中国大陆的企业之所以敢唯利是图,罔顾民众健康,原因在于有关部门的不作为。引用习语“猫儿不在,老鼠就猖獗”;其次,在执法部门强而有力的执法力度下,企业一定会规规矩矩的。
    第三段:应该加强执法力度解决中国的食品安全问题。
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