Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals The modern society

游客2024-09-03  9

问题     Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals
    The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before. Some young people may become successful overnight. But actually, immediate fame and recognition usually won’t last long. What should be encouraged is to pursue long-term, realistic goals. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

选项

答案     Young People Should Pursue Long-term, Realistic Goals
    With the stories of overnight billionaires, such as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg, many college students are thinking about their billions of dollars, but they don’t know what to do but wait Under this context, I think young people should pursue long-term and realistic goals.
    Long-term goals can make us far-sighted. A major problem of young people is too benefit-driven. They would ask, "If I do this and that, what can I get from it, immediately?" A long-term goal would enable them to focus on the bigger picture, instead of being obsessed with trivial and instant benefits. It is estimated that the odds to become a billionaire in china is less than 0.0007%. While daydreams of becoming billionaires are too difficult to be realized, they may finally frustrate us. Realistic goals can make us surefooted. They are often easier to be reached, which can make us more confident. The more surefooted and confident we are, the more possible we are to be successful.
    In conclusion, young people should pursue long-term and realistic goals, because these goals can teach them to look beyond the present and make them more surefooted and confident.

解析     本题属于“给定观点型”作文,涉及的题材是“品德修养”。该题要求考生对“年轻人应追求长期、现实的目标”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从比尔?盖茨和马克?扎克伯格入题,指出年轻人应该追求长远和现实的目标。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.长远的目标能让我们有远见,不会太急功近利、只着眼于眼前。
    2.现实的目标能使我们脚踏实地,不会总是做不切实际的白日梦。
    结尾:重申观点,长远和现实的目标能使年轻人更有远见、更加稳重。
转载请注明原文地址:https://tihaiku.com/zcyy/3742022.html
最新回复(0)