With the advent of the Internet, many students study with the help of the Int

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问题    With the advent of the Internet, many students study with the help of the Internet while others still prefer to use the library as a reliable source of information. Which one do you prefer?
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   The Internet or the Library?
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案    The Internet or Library?
   Due to  the  convenience  of obtaining  information  through  the Internet, more and more students prefer to rely on it for information. Meanwhile some students are still using the library as a source of information.  As for me,  I use the library more frequently than the Internet.
   For one thing, I am of the opinion that the library is more of a reliable source of information. As is known to all, publications will have to go through strict censorship before coming out. In school libraries, librarians will order books according to the requirements of teaching and learning. In this way, readers can have access to reliable information. Furthermore, the library is a better place to study in. When you are in the library, with almost all the students being absorbed in their studies, you will be able to concentrate on your books in such an atmosphere. When using the Internet, one will be more easily distracted by tabloid news.
   For another, although using the Internet is more convenient, I find it is unhealthy to study in front of the computer screen for long hours. There are warnings that radiation from computers may do harm to our body. Take myself for instance. My sight has become weaker and weaker after unrestricted use of computer. In consequence, I have set a rule that limits my use of computer to one hour each time.
   In summary, despite the convenience of the Internet, I think studying in the library is a healthier experience, for library provides a better studying atmosphere and a more reliable information source.

解析    开头部分
   作者首先介绍了两种不同的观点,之后通过As for me,…引出自己的观点:比起使用因特网,更喜欢使用图书馆来获取信息。
   中间部分
   1)通过论述利用图书馆的优点和因特网的缺点来强调使用图书馆的益处,正反对比,论证有力。
   2)在论证过程中,分别使用For one thing,…和For another,…来引出这两个方面。而在论述图书馆的优点时,用Furthermore,…来连接其两点好处,过渡比较自然。
   结尾部分
   用In summary,…进行总结,先肯定了使用因特网的便利性,之后强调利用图书馆学习的优点,重申主题。
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