For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than

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问题 For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words, whose title is Electronic Dictionary. Remember your composition must be written according to the following outline. Write your composition on the Composition Sheet inTest PaperTwo.
Outline:
1.电子词典有很多好处。
2.电子词典也有很多弊端。
Words for reference:
traditional dictionary, handy and convenient, explanations, patterns, much attached to, become lazy, a passive attitude towards learning

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答案                         Electronic Dictionary
    Today, the electronic dictionary has become a very useful tool for students who learn English. Compared with the traditional dictionary, the advantage of the electronic dictionary are obvious.
    For one thing, it is small in size and light in weight, which means it is more handy and convenient. For another, it can read words and store countless words.
    The electronic dictionary, however, has the following shortcomings. In the first place, it does not provide detailed explanation of the words. In the second place, it is easy for a student to forget a word as easily as to look up a word in an electronic dictionary. What’s worse, if a student is much too attached to it, he may develop the habit of laziness and form a passive attitude towards learning
    Based on the advantages and disadvantages discussed above, it is desirable for people to combine the use of the electronic and traditional paper dictionaries.

解析 从结构上看,该考生将原来的两点提纲要点分成三段来写,加上一个结论,属于合理调整(当然考生也可以只写两段)。从论证上看,理由和例子典型、充分,并且陈述有序。从语言表达上看,该范文使用了全部参考词汇,并且使用了其他较好词汇;同时长短句结合,并使用了并列句、定语从句、同位语从句、比较句型等。该范文属于高分甚至满分档次。
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