For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topi

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Preparing for Emergency. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
1.灾难随时都有可能发生,带来巨大伤害
2.因此,知道如何应对灾难十分重要
3.为了让学生更好地应对灾难,学校应当……
                        Preparing for Emergency

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答案                         Preparing for Emergency
    A disaster can be a natural one, like a flood, hurricane or earthquake, or man-made, like fire or chemical spill. (1) It has been with us and you’ll never know when it will occur. (2) And when it does occur, it can cause significant physical damage or destruction, or loss of life.
    Since we live in a world where (3) disasters are a common occurrence, (4) disaster preparation is of vital importance. (4) Preparing for a disaster can reduce the fear, anxiety and losses that disasters cause. (4) It can also greatly increase the chances that people survive. (5) For example, thanks to regular emergency evacuation drills, all the staff and students from a middle school (6) survived the catastrophic earthquake struck Wenchuan in 2008.
    To better prepare students for disasters, there are at least two things that schools should do. (7) First, educate students about disasters. For example, teach students what earthquakes are, why they occur, and what effects they have. (7) Second, give students tips on how to deal with a range of dangerous situations from fires and flooding to crime and terrorism. In the areas where (3) disasters like earthquakes are frequent, it’s necessary that schools (6) conduct emergency evacuation drills regularly.

解析 (1)指出灾难随时可能发生
(2)灾难造成的伤害
(3)“灾难频发”的两种表达,避免死板
(4)采用“总一分”结构,脉络清晰
(5)举例更有说服力
(6)精彩短语:“在灾难性的地震中幸存”:“开展紧急疏散演习”
(7)给出学校的两个做法,一目了然
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