For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should We Give Gifts to Teachers on Teachers’ Day? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
1.有人赞成在教师节给老师送礼
2.有人则表示反对
3.我认为…
              Should We Give Gifts to Teachers on Teachers’ Day?

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答案               Should We Give Gifts to Teachers on Teachers’ Day?
    (1) Whether we should give gifts to teachers on Teachers’ Day has become a topic of debate in China recently. Some people say we should for two reasons. (2) The first reason is that gifts presented to teachers show our respect and appreciation for teachers’ contribution. (2) The second is that giving gifts to teachers is regarded as a virtue, which has been a tradition for thousands of years.
    Some people, (3) on the contrary, maintain that we should ban gifts on Teacher’s Day. (4) The festival, they say, has been materialized as more students’ parents turn to expensive gifts or even cash to offer teachers for some personal interests. It (5) has put great pressure on parents especially those that are not rich. (4) Worse still, it may lead to the corruption of teachers.
    (6) In my view, gifts still serve as a good way to express people’s love and respect toward honorable teachers and should not be banned. (6) However, people should give small and meaningful rather than expensive gifts to teachers (5) for the sake of students, parents and teachers. After all, (7) it is not the price of the gift but just the heart you put into it that is meaning and important.

解析 (1)开篇点题
(2)说明支持送礼的两个理由,一目了然
(3)“相反地”,过渡到说明反对者的观点
(4)分析送礼的危害
(5)亮点词组:“给…施加巨压”:“为了…”
(6)给出两个看法
(7)强调句型的彰显语法功底
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