For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the re

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "When you blame others, you give up your power to change. " You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案                     Stop Blaming Others but Start to Change
    [1] The journey of life is full of ups and downs [6] on account of various reasons. [2] But there are always individuals tending to blame others when mistakes, failures and setbacks occur. [3] In fact, it’s useless to complain because we’ll lose our power to change the situation when we blame others instead of [3] just taking responsibilities.
    [4] On the one hand, one may win the respect and reputation when one never blames others but takes responsibilities bravely. [5] In the early 1900s, the bank of Frank, an Italian-American banker, [6] went bankruptcy as a result of the robbery. However, he didn’t blame anyone else but worked hard with his wife in order to compensate his depositors in the belief that he should be responsible, morally. [4] On the other hand, being responsible makes us [6] get along well with others and brings peace to the community. [7] We don’t exist all alone but live interdependently with people around us. When things go wrong and failures take place, we must not complain too much and blame others in order that negative moods couldn’t spread everywhere.[8] In conclusion, blaming others cannot solve any problems. [9] We should take responsibility bravely and make situation develop towards a right direction.

解析 [1]引入话题
[2]转折,描述现状
[3]结合题目引语,引出主题
[4]从两个方面论述承担责任的意义
[5]以银行家Frank的故事为例
[6]亮点词汇:on account of“由于”:go bankruptcy“破产”;get along well with“与……相处融洽”
[7]以日常生活为例
[8]总结上文论述
[9]重述主题,总结全文
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