For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Patience

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Patience by commenting on the saying, "Patience is bitter but its fruit is sweet." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案     On Patience
    In this hustle and bustle of the world, people’s patience seems to be wearing thin, either because they can’t afford the time, or because they fear to miss an opportunity. However, the saying "Patience is bitter but its fruit is sweet. " still holds its ground in many cases.
    For one thing, patience is crucial to people from all walks of life. Take teachers as an example. Good teachers should not only impart knowledge to students, but also care about their psychological state, especially those of the so-called "inferior students". Thus, it requires a lot of patience when teachers look after these academically and sometimes morally poor children. For another, patience is of great importance to the process of decision-making. There is no doubt that haste would result in poor decisions which are made without enough research and adequate thinking. Therefore, patience may cost a lot of time, but it is still worth it.
    All in all, being patient might take a little pain, but we can harvest sweet fruit afterwards.

解析     这是一篇议论文,讨论的是关于耐心的问题。
    第一段指出,如今人们渐渐失去了耐心,或是因为他们没有时间,或是因为他们担心失去机会。但是,在很多情况下,耐心仍然有好的回报。先点出耐心缺失这一现象,再表明自己的观点,这是议论文写作的常见手法。
    第二段对引言进行评论,从两个方面论证了耐心在当今社会仍具有重要意义。有耐心在各行各业中至关重要,并以教师为例加以说明。教师不仅要传授学生知识,还需要关注他们的心理健康,尤其是班里的“差生”,这就要求教师有极大的耐心。耐心还影响决策制定,匆匆忙忙会作出缺乏研究和思考的决定。总而言之,耐心值得花时间。
    第三段总结全文。指出有耐心会收获甜蜜果实,再次重申主题。
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