For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the re

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "Successful people does not only have talents but also some other things". You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

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答案                         Hard Work And Success
     (1)Some people hold the view that success is only for those with talent or who born in a good family, but I think talent or good family is not enough to be successful. At least, hard work is also a(2)vital factor. Hard work to success is like bricks to a building.
     (3)To succeed in life, one first needs to set a goal and then gradually make it more practical. And in order to realize the goal, one must spend a large amount of time studying and practicing.(4)We all know that Han Hong is a famous Chinese singer but what you may not know is that she spent hours every day practicing just in order to sing a song well enough. Sometimes she even missed her meals. Many people have such similar dreams but only a few people(5)have the drive to(6)pursue them diligently.
     (7)To become great at certain things, you need to work(8)day in and day out. When you see people(9)exhibiting some great skills or having achieved great success, you know that they have put in a huge part of their life as a dear cost for their success.

解析 (1)开头表明自己的观点。用A to B is like C to D“A与B的关系就像C与D的关系”这个句型生动地说明了后天努力对于成功的关键性。
(2)vital意思为“关键的”。
(3)首先说明一般成功的大致过程,进而引出努力在成功过程中扮演的重要角色。
(4)用韩红的例子恰当地说明了努力与成功的关系。
(5)have the drive to do something意思是“做某事的动力,有动力做某事”。
(6)pursue意思是“追求”。
(7)结尾再次强调成功是努力和付出的结果,首尾呼应。
(8)day in and day out意思是“天天,夜以继日”。
(9)exhibit的意思是“展示”。
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