For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on th

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss the significance of a healthy diet. You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
   

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答案     Significance of a Healthy Diet
    As can be seen from the cartoon, an over-weight patient tells the doctor that he has a seemingly healthy diet by eating lots of junk food such as pizza.
    The cartoon actually conveys a sense of irony because such eating habit is essentially not healthy. Nowadays, as the pace of life is increasing, people’ s lifestyle has become one that filled with unhealthy fast food. Therefore, a wholesome diet should be an indispensable part of one’ s lifestyle. The reasons why people ought to eat healthy are as follow. For one thing, as its name suggests, junk food fails to provide nutrition and harms health, for it contains much fat and calories. There is an old saying, "you are what you eat" , indicating fitness can’t do without fresh ingredients. For another, a good eating habit is the basis of health whereas health is the guarantee of one’ s happiness. In fact, people who suffer from poor habits tend to be in bad mood compared with those who eat healthy.
    As far as I’ m concerned, we should be aware of the significance of a balanced, healthy diet, which is really vital for all, and keep it on so as to build strong bodies.

解析    1.这是一篇图画作文,且需要根据图画阐述自己的观点,时态应为一般现在时;图画内容很关键,图画中病人说的“我吃得很健康,我吃冰淇淋从不加盐,我只吃脱咖啡因的比萨,喝脱脂啤酒”,具有讽刺意味,再加上题干中的要求“a healthy diet”,可知这是一篇讨论现代人需要真正健康的饮食习惯的作文。
   2.综合图画和题干信息,可以提炼出写作的主题——人们需要健康的饮食习惯。
   3.确定写作思路:饮食与生活、健康密切相关;快餐食品极大影响了人们健康。从这两方面可以探讨健康饮食的重要性。
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