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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Sch

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Sch

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On School Violence. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1．校园暴力事件时有发生
    2．分析产生这种现象的原因
    3．应该如何解决校园暴力问题
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答案     On School Violence
    Nowadays, violent incidents take place at times and have extended to schoolyards. Reports about school violence have aroused great public concern and a lot of discussions, hoping to find effective solutions.
    A number of factors are accountable for this problem. Students are facing so much pressure in study and life that they have little time and energy to care about their mental health. As a result, they tend to deal with problems in a simple and violent way. Another contributing factor is that many evil persons in society have become so insane that they rush into schools to attack the innocent students, even commit murders, which has been reported frequently in the media and has created great negative effects.
    To solve the problem, effective measures should be taken immediately to keep students far away from violence in schoolyards. For one thing, schools should take responsibility for educating students how to relieve the pressure they are facing. For another, we should combine forces with families, schools and society to struggle against violence. Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious school and a happy school life.
解析     第一段提出，校园暴力现象引起了社会的广泛关注。第二句句末使用现在分词短语作伴随状语，为开篇的亮点之处。
    第二段从两个方面分析校园暴力现象产生的原因。首先，学生在学习和生活等方面面临着过大的压力，无处发泄，因而产生暴力倾向和行为；其次，社会上一些失去理智、丧心病狂的人去学校袭击无辜的学生。第二句和第四句中都使用了so．．．that．．．结构，丰富了语言内容。末句使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，补充主句，使得内容表达更加充分。
    第三段提出解决校园暴力问题的举措。学校应该承担起教育学生缓解压力的责任；与此同时，应该联合家庭、学校、社会等各方力量，保证校园安全，共建和谐校园。
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