For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Cr

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Crisis of Confidence. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.当今社会出现了信任危机
    2.分析造成这种现象的原因及其危害
    3.我们应该怎么做

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答案     The Crisis of Confidence
    With the social development, there appears a widespread concern over credit. We are shocked to learn that the crisis of confidence becomes more and more severe nowadays.
    There are two major factors contributing to the problem. For one thing, it’s peoples dishonest behavior that causes others’ distrust of them. For another, a proportion of people don’t treat their friends, as well as partners with sincerity, looking at others in a doubtful eye, which inevitably leads to the phenomenon. It goes without question that hazards to us emerge along with the crisis, such as indifferent relationships among people and loose ties of cooperation amid businessmen. If we suspect others constantly, it will bring no benefit to the harmony of our society.
    Confronted with the problem, people have figured out many effective ways to solve it. As the proverb says, credit keeps the crown of the causeway. We should behave in accordance with our traditional virtues and break down the barriers of distrust. Only in this way will the crisis of confidence be eliminated.

解析     第一段指出社会上存在信任危机。
    第二段分析这一现象产生的原因及其危害。人们的一些不诚实的行为,以及人们不能信任自己的朋友和合作伙伴导致了信任危机,而这无疑会使人与人之间的关系更加冷漠,破坏社会的和谐。第二句使用强调句式it is...that...,在平时写作中要注意应用。第四句中使用了经典句式It goes without question that...,意为“毫无疑问……”。
    第三段提出解决的方法。为人处世要牢记传统美德,慢慢使这些不信任的壁垒消融。首句采用过去分词短语作状语,第二句引用名言谚语,末句为Only引导的倒装句式,使得结尾段亮点频现。
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