For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university

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问题    For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below.
   1.对食堂问题进行说明。
   2.提出改进建议。
   3.期待学校解决这一问题。

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答案    Dear Mr. President,
   I am a student of computer science in our university. I am writing this letter to you to show about the problems of the canteen service on campus on behalf of some students of our department.
   Firstly, we need more varieties of foods served to the students, which means every student can get the food that he thinks suitable for his pocket-money allowance. Secondly, we find it essential to elongate the opening hours of the canteen. A student from a class that ends at 12:00 may reach the canteen no sooner than 12:30. However, the fact is that the canteen will be closed when he gets there. Thirdly, we are greatly concerned with the dining environment. We feel that student diners are entitled to a better dining environment than what they are having now.
   We do hope that the university authority will look into the problems and solve them.
                                                               Sincerely yours,
                                                                     Li Ming

解析 第一段:说明自己的身份,并说明写信的目的。
第二段:分条列举具体问题,针对问题做详细阐述。
第三段:表达自己对学校解决问题的殷切期待。
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