For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Cr

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Craze for Certificates. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 现在社会上有一股证书热
    2.证书热的原因
    3.我对证书热的看法
                     The Craze for Certificates

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答案     Nowadays, a craze for certificates has prevailed in our society. Students are working hard to get certificates like CET-4 and CET-6. Company staff and even some officials go back to school for the certificates to meet various needs. It seems everyone is striving for certificates.
    Why are certificates so important and attractive? It can be explained from two aspects. Firstly, certificate education is an indispensable supplement to curricular education. Extracurricular study for certificates help develop one’s skills for future use, most of which cannot be acquired from the regular classroom study. What’s more, the craze for certificates arises from the demand of the competitive society, where certificates play an important part in job hunting. The more certificates one has, the more job opportunities one will have
    In my opinion, while it is true that certificates are essential to one’s future career, it doesn’t follow that certificates mean everything. one’s ability behind certificates matters much more. It is, therefore, suggested that more emphasis should be put on the process of getting a certificate than on the purpose.

解析     用词亮点:(1) 在第一段首句中,Nowadays意思为“现在”,通常用于引出现象。类似表达法有Now,At present time,Recently等;此外,has prevailed意思为“盛行”,用于描述现象。类似表达法有has spread, has become popular等。(2) 第二段倒数第二句中,arise from意思为“源于”,用于描述原因。类似表达法有 come from,stem from,derive from等。
    句式亮点:(1) 第一段尾句中“It seems…”委婉地引出某一事实或现象。(2) 第二段尾句中使用了“The more..the more”的结构,意思为“越……越……”,表示比较。(3) 第三段首句中"while it is true that…it doesn’t follow that…",意思为“虽然……是对的,但是不能说……”,用于引出观点和推论。(4) 第三段尾句中more emphasis should be put on意思为“我们要更加重视……”,类似表达法有greater importance should be attached to,more attention should be paid to等。
    篇章亮点:(1) 第二段首句利用问句引出原因,承上启下。(2) 第二段首句之后使用了“It can be explained from two angles.Firstly,…What’s more,…”表示列举的结构。
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