For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Do Par

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Do Part-time Jobs Bring to Us. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 越来越多的大学生开始兼职
2.兼职给我们带了什么

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答案                     What Do Part-time Jobs Bring to Us
    [l]At present a fashion of taking part-time jobs is striding on the broad. [2]As the proverb goes, "Every coin has its two sides." [3]There are both blessings and
    [4]The advantages are as follows. [5]First and foremost, [6]taking a part-time job enables some students to deal with their financial problems and become financially independent. [7]What’s more, part-time jobs provide students with good opportunities [8]to develop strong senses of communication and cooperation,  and practice what they have learned in class, [9]which will benefit their future career. [10]However, the disadvantageous side is [11]that part-time jobs consume too much time and efforts. [12]Some college students are not mature enough to [13]count the cost and [14]strike a perfect balance between work and study.
    [15]In short, doing part-time jobs has its duality, and we should learn to balance the pros and cons.

解析 [1]用a fashion is striding on the broad 引出话题,吸引读者注意力,
[2]用谚语表明主题,新颖切题。
[3]There are both blessings and curses.是典型的引出利弊兼而有之的句型。
[4][5][7]分析优点,层次分明。
[10]用However笔锋一转,开始论述缺点。从行文可以看出,优点居多,所以先行论述,所费笔墨也较多。
[13]count the cost是“权衡得失”的地道表达。
[14]strike a balance between...是表示“平衡两个事物”的表达法,常用的还有“strike a balance between work and rest (劳逸结合)”“strike a perfect balance between a healthy diet and exercises(健康饮食和运动完美结合)”等。
[15]结尾段总结对利弊皆有事物的分析。
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