For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter to the Mayor about t

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter to the Mayor about the Renovation of the Old City. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是刘梅,请你就本市某些开发商无计划拆除旧建筑,改造城区的现象给市长写一封信,内容应涉及进行城区改造的必要性、没有计划地拆除旧建筑的危害,以及你本人的观点和建议。

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答案                                                               [1]Aug. 28th, 2005
Dear Mr. Mayor,
    [2]I’m a citizen who has been living here for over 50 years. I’m writing to express my views on the problem of demolition in our city.
    [3]The controversial issue often brought into the limelight is that  [4]whether we should promote urbanization or preserve the old buildings. [5]Personally, I think the preservation of ancient houses is of great importance to our modem lives. [6]First and foremost, [7]the old buildings should be cherished  [8]because they embody the Chinese architectural culture, [9]and they are the treasures of the world at large. [10]Moreover, these ancient buildings may be attractive scenic spots for foreigners. Therefore, [11]it would be better if you conduct careful evaluation of the buildings be- forehand in order to avoid unplanned demolition.
    [12]Thank you for your attention. [13]And my suggestion is open to any honest objection.
    Best regards.
                                                            [14]Yours faithfully,
                                                                        Liu Mei

解析 [1][2][3][12][14]缩进式格式:
1.先写日期,日期靠右
2.每段段首缩进四个英文字母
3.结束敬语写在正文下面一两行处的右侧
4. 署名写在结束敬语下面一至二行,要从结束敬语的中部写起
[2]开头部分自我介绍,并用I’m writing to do明确写信目的。
[3]用The controversial issue often brought into the limelight引出有争议的现象;
[5]用Personally,I think 引出个人观点和建议。
[6][10]用递进手法阐明利害关系,层次分明。
[11]用it would be better if you礼貌地提出建议。
[12][13]典型的建议信结尾的写法:先感谢对方的关注,再以委婉的语气期盼回复。
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