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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
On Excessive Packaging
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On Excessive Packaging
Nowadays many commodities are packaged excessively. (1) It is very common that a very small item is wrapped in a very big and luxury box. (2) Take the moon cake as an example. Every Mid-Autumn Day, we can see various delicate packaging boxes (3) in which there are only a few small moon cakes. Obviously, excessive packaging has become very popular in our daily life.
(4) Then what are responsible for this phenomenon? (5) Firstly, many manufactures package the goods (6) as luxuriously and beautifully as possible to raise the prices of some common goods. (5) Secondly, many customers think that delicately packaged goods (7) are superior to those with plain packaging, (8) which further boosts excessive packaging.
(9) From my point of view, delicate packaging, (10) to some extent, means good quality, but excessive packaging is (11) not only wasteful but also unfriendly to the environment. Therefore, (12) on the one hand, I suggest the laws on packaging be perfected to restrict excessive packaging. (12) On the other hand, as responsible customers, we should first consider the quality, not the packaging. This, (10) I believe, can combat the further expansion of excessive packaging.
解析
(1)表示“……十分常见”,是用来描述普遍现象的常用句式
(2)举例说明,更有说服力
(3)定语从句,which作介词宾语
(4)承上启下,通过问句自然引出原因
(5)从两方面简述原因,条理清晰
(6)as…as possible,表示“尽可能……”
(7)“优于”,本身表示比较,不需要使用比较级,注意前后的比较对象
(8)非限制性定语从句
(9)开始阐述个人观点
(10)插入语的使用恰到好处
(11)“不但……而且……”,连接并列结构,说明两个危害
(12)从两方面阐述建议,条理清晰
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