For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Flea M

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Flea Markets on Campus following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
    1.近年来,大学校园跳蚤市场兴起
    2.有人认为跳蚤市场会带来各种问题
    3.我的观点

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答案     Flea Markets on Campus
    In recent years, flea markets are on the rise on campus, which is welcomed by many college students. In addition, many people outside the campus also join in the flea markets, making them similar to the markets outside the campus. This phenomenon has aroused hot discussion.
    Flea markets play a significant role in making the best use of goods, as what you don’t need may be in hot demand for others. What’s more, by providing a platform for students to share and exchange what they have, flea markets can enhance the friendship between the students, and accordingly promote the harmony of the campus. For these reasons, flea markets are welcomed by both the students and the teachers. However, some people argue that flea markets may lead to considerable confusion with so many people pouring into the campus. Besides, the quality of the goods exchanged in the flea markets cannot be guaranteed.
    In my opinion, we should take into account the significant role that flea markets play in making full use of goods and boosting the harmony of the campus. Furthermore, flea markets are beneficial to the majority of the students despite their drawbacks. In a word, we should allow flea markets to thrive on campus.

解析     第一段为引言段,提出近年来跳蚤市场兴起,最后一句为过渡句引出下文。
    第二段分析不同人的观点,有些人支持这种现象,有些人反对。支持的理由有:物尽其用,加强同学间的友谊,促进校园和谐。反对的理由有:导致校园混乱,货物质量没有保证。本段第二句使用by providing引导方式状语,句式多变,不失为一个亮点。
    最后一段阐述自己的观点。尽管跳蚤市场有一定的缺点,但利大于弊,我们应当允许跳蚤市场在大学校园里发展。
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