The very word of networks changes people’s life a great deal and in the worl

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问题     The very word of networks changes people’s life a great deal and in the world thousands and hundreds of people surf online everyday. So there occurs a question-- should there be someone guard the Net--Cyber- police
   Someone thinks that networks don’t want Cyberpolice guards, but other people have different ideas. And what is your opinion.
   Requirement: Write an essay about 400 words, commenting and expressing your view on environment pollution and protection.
   In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement and in-the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案                  Should Cyber-police Guard the Net
   When we hear hackers, our first response is thousands of monitors went dark or took off in no time with millions of programs or data destroyed or disgone, and a number of sub- scribers or stations disabled on the Internet. The powerful damages of hackers or computer viruses result in our great fright of it, which, however, simultaneously predicts the birth of cyber - police. Cyber -police should guard the net.
   Now cyber - police are being used in almost every set of computer at each comer around the world. It is often utilized by people to pick up and reject illegal user visiting themor to search for and kill all kinds of viruses transmitted to them in order to protect the data in computer from being destroyed or being pirated. By the help of cyber - police, it is hard to count how much hage directly or indirectly’ is saved.
   What is more, its usage is not restrained in this aspect, it can also be used to filter information unwelcome. With the expanding of the Internet, more and more subscribers are connected to it, which include common citizes, business enterprises, and other services. Too often our email boxes or stations are jammed with all kinds of advertisements or other messages reminders. Due to cyber-polices’s function of filtering, we can relief from searching for useful information in the forest - like information. And sometimes cyber - police are also to be available to recover the data damaged by viruses or mistake operations.
   But there is a problem with the appearance of cyber - police in cyber space. Under the monitoring of information everywhere, we cannot surf the Internet and access data freely. But Safety and freedom, which one do you like? More safely, less free down, vice versus. It is a presever problem. The current situation shows that much more attention is paid to the former rather than the other. And we are greatly coinced that cyber - police has brought about advantages to the use of computers.

解析 首先要仔细分析这个题目——电脑警察需不需要保护网络,有两种可能,同意或者反对。仔细权衡自己对网络警察的认识,分析各自的利弊,然后得出自己的结论。
   如果是网络需要警察,那么定下题目,开始构思每段的结构,在第一段中考生首先要表明自己的态度,即陈述自己的根本观点。在组织语言的时候要精炼,全面。同时要注意立场鲜明清楚。
   在第二段中仔细分析你认为网络需要警察的各种原因。首先,网络警察可以将黄色、不健康、带有病毒等不受欢迎的信息处理掉,并及时通知信息使用者;另外,信息的数目及种类太繁杂,网络警察可以及时缓解且改善并处理过时或者废弃的信息以方便电脑使用者;最后,网络警察还可能帮助恢复由于病毒或错误操作而造成的不便。
   在第三段中,作者在少量不利条件的基础上进一步肯定网络警察的作用并再次申明自己的观点,小结全文,结束写作。
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