The typical routine for most students at colleges is waking up, going to class

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问题   The typical routine for most students at colleges is waking up, going to class, doing homework, and then going to sleep, periodically eating throughout the day. But not all students like to follow this routine and opt to get their education by their own means, skipping class. What do you think of skipping class? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:
1. Should College Students Be Allowed to Skip Classes?
  In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
  Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
  Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案   Should college students be allowed to skip classes?Our school regulation handbook says no. However, in my opinion, college students should have the right to do so.
  First and foremost, we should bear in mind the purpose of students’ attending classes—to gain more knowledge and skills.Generally speaking, going to classes is a good and irreplaceable way for students to obtain knowledge.However, sometimes students can benefit more if they skip certain classes, for example, when they are not in the right mood for classes at some particular moment, or when they do need some sleep that provides them with necessary energy for more important things later that day, or when they have to do something else more important at that specific time.That is to say, when students cannot learn efficiently in class,  why must they attend them?Of course, if students are not familiar with the content of the missed class, they should make up for it.
  Another reason why college students can skip classes is that some of them deem skipping class as a means of alternative education.Almost all the college students are over 18 and they have formed good sense of judgment to consider what is good and what is bad for themselves.They know for what and for whom they are studying, and they are able to make sensible decisions whether to skip a particular class or not.If they can learn better alone with a book in front of them instead of an instructor, why should they be compelled to attend the class?
  The world today witnesses the "knowledge explosion".Mountains of useful knowledge and information are waiting for young students to acquire or master, so they are in dire need of efficiency in learning. However, students are quite different intellectually—some are smarter than the others and they can learn more rapidly.On the other hand, teaching approaches adopted by teachers are usually based on the level of the average students.The smart students feel the classes no challenge at all and they don’t want to see their time flow away without enough accomplished.So if it is a waste of time for them to go to certain classes, why must they attend them?
  On all accounts, college students should have the right to skip classes, and are not to blame by colleges and teachers.

解析   开门见山地提出问题,切中主题,是八级作文常用的开头方式。注意第一段较短,但层次清晰,句子简短有力,清楚地表明了文章论点。
   regulation book意为“管理手册”。
   bear in mind意为“记住";students’这里作动名词短语attending classes的逻辑主语。注意破折号的应用,这里用在一个解释性的分句或句子前面,表示补充说明。
   irreplaceable为用词亮点,意为“不可替代的”。
   典型复合长句,注意借鉴,其主干为students can benefit more if…, when…,or when…, Or when…。at that particular moment与at that specific time为同义短语,这里使用不同表达可避免重复。do need为强调结构,加强语气。
   That is to say是表示进一步解释说明的常用表达语,也可写作i.e.。其近义词组为in other words.
   make up for意为“补偿,补上”。
   Another reason is that…是常用的衔接语。 deem…as…意为“将……看作”。alternative education意为“选择性教育”。
   sense of judgment意为“判断力”。
   instead of an instructor的完整形式为 instead of with an instructor in front of them,写作时应注意运用此省略的表达方式,可使文章更为简练。
   witness为用词亮点,意为“见证”。knowledge explosion意为“知识爆炸”。
   in dire need of sth.为用词亮点,意为“急需,迫切需要";intellectually意为“智力上”。
   adopted by teachers为过去分词短语作后置定语,修饰teaching approaches"教学方法”。average student意为“中等学生”。
   flow away常用来表示时间的流逝。
   On an accounts意为“总之”,为常用结束语之一。
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