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问题     With the rapid development of China’s economy, many people have bought Or are planning to buy cars. Some people believe that private cars will bring us more benefits, while others object to growing private cars. What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:
    Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案             Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars.
    With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.
    Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.
    However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars cause traffic congestion SO greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration of traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
    In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.

解析     首先正视现实,随着中国经济的迅猛发展,买车或准备买车的人越来越多。但大力发展私家车的利弊关系如何呢?
    汽车带来的好处主要有以下几点:为许多人提供工作机会,为其他产业提供强有力的支持;在条件允许的情况下,拥有私家车可以使我们工作更加有效;生活将变得更加便捷。
    有些人强烈反对大力发展私家车。汽车会排放出大量的有害物质,污染空气,对人类身体健康造成影响。私家车造成的交通堵塞使汽车带来的舒适度与自由度大打折扣。车祸瞬间夺走人们宝贵的生命。
    最后,对整篇文章进行总结,一方面承认汽车在人们日常生活中所扮演的重要角色,另一方面指出由此带来的问题更加不容忽视。末尾再次表明作者反对发展私家车的观点。
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