Some students at X University get professionals to clean their dorms, which

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问题     Some students at X University get professionals to clean their dorms, which has aroused wide concern in our society. Is this a good new form of efficiency or just an excuse to get out of work? Please deliver your opinions on this issue. Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:
    My View on Students’ Hiring Cleaners
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案             My View on Students’ Hiring Cleaners
    Recently a report has it that some students at X University get cleaners to clean their dorms, which brings about an intense debate. Some people regard hiring cleaners as a new form of efficiency which deserves no accusation while some others believe that it is an excuse to escape from the daily grind. As far as I am concerned, the former argument is not plausible enough for the following reasons.
    In the process of their achieving maturity, the most important thing for college students to do is to cultivate a sense of responsibility and attain independence. As one of the purposes of college education is to encourage a sense of responsibility in students, the use of such a service might counteract what a university is trying to accomplish. Of course time in colleges is valuable, and study is important, but there is something more significant—-independence In this regard, it should be made clear where the money used to hire cleaners comes from. If it is earned by the students themselves, surely they can enjoy such services. But the case is that most of the college students have to depend on their parents for financial support. Then how can they declare that they are growing into responsible individuals when spending their parents’ money on something that they can do easily by themselves?
    As an old saying goes, "If someone cannot sweep a house by himself, then he cannot conquer the world." Anyone who wants to achieve something in the future must start with the most trivial things in life. Besides, college students are not so busy that they can certainly squeeze some time to do housework. In fact, some of them spend a lot of time surfing online, chatting with friends or simply watching videos. In this case, doing housework seems more wholesome.
    Furthermore, some people think that hiring cleaners threatens students’ unity because it creates another differential between the haves and have-nots on campus. Some students can afford the service and some others cannot, which obviously widens the socioeconomic gap between them. Even worse, some students pay people to clean the dorm out of vanity just because all their classmates do that. This will certainly cause great psychological pressure to the students and serious financial burden on their family.
    In conclusion, cleaning should be done by college students themselves rather than by professional cleaners.

解析     这篇议论型作文要求考生就有关大学生雇用清洁工打扫寝室的问题提出自己的看法。根据题目要求,文章的结构安排如下:
    第一部分(第一段)首先指出针对大学生雇用清洁工打扫寝室的现象,人们有两种不同的看法:有人认为这代表着效率的提高,有人认为这是逃避工作。然后作者表明前一观点是不合理的。
    第二部分阐述大学生不应该雇用清洁工打扫寝室的具体原因,主要体现在三个方面:
    1.在走向成熟的过程中,大学生应注重培养自己的责任感和自力更生的能力,雇用清洁工打扫寝室不仅与这一成长原则相违背,也与大学教育的目标相左,具体说来……
    2.使用谚语“一屋不扫,何以扫天下”,大学生成才需从小事做起,具体说来……
    3.雇用清洁工打扫寝室不利于大学生的团结,带来较多负面影响,具体表现在……
    第三部分(最后一段)进行总结,指出大学生应该自己来打扫寝室卫生。
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