On a Chinese college campus, usually several college students share a dormit

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问题     On a Chinese college campus, usually several college students share a dormitory. Unfortunately some college students do not pay enough attention to living in a shared environment. For instance, they may ignore the sanitation of their dormitory or they may suddenly start to play music while others are sound asleep. Hence the idea of making dormitory policies to curb these indecencies has become popular on campus.
    You are in favor of this idea and have therefore decided to write to your university campus radio a passage entitled:
                                IN SUPPORT OF DORMITORY POLICIES
    You are to write a passage of approximately 300 words on this issue. In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案                                    In Support of Dormitory Policies
    On our campus, usually several college students share a dormitory. This happens partly because of the shortage of housing and partlybecause of some possible benefits. However, with the sharing of dormitories there also arise some problems. For instance, some of our students may ignore the sanitation of their common dormitory; some music lovers may turn on their radio late at night when others are ready to sleep. Such indecencies have led to discord among the dormitory members. Consequently some people suggest that some dormitory policies be made to effectively curb the various kinds of misconduct. For my part, I vote for the suggestion.
    First and foremost, our university dormitory is a public place for the students’ life and study. As we know, public places are generally administrated by virtue of rules and regulations. For example, if you go to the cinema, you need to abide by its rules. When you are in the school library, you are also supposed to follow some regulations regarding your behavior. As a matter of fact, you can always see notices of this kind in public places, such as squares, waiting rooms and swimming pools. Though it is much smaller in size or scale, our dormitory is also a place for common activities. Therefore, any individual is not expected to interfere with others in any form. Through the outlining and implementing of some policies, we dormitory members can coordinate our daily activities and minimize the chances of disharmony.
    Secondly, making dormitory policies can best ensure our performance of dormitory duties. Suppose one of the policies stipulates that the dormitory members take turns mopping the floor. No one, then, can excuse himself/herself from the duty. If one neglects his/her duty, other inhabitants may remind him/her of it, or even urge him/her to do his/ her duty by resort to the policy. By mutual commitment, this does not constitute a threat to one’s dignity or face, and consequently will not provoke any interpersonal conflict. However, emotional clash might result in the absence of dormitory policies, as evidenced by earlier reports.
    Thirdly, and more profoundly, making and enforcing dormitory policies can help cultivate among us university students good living habits that are to benefit us in the future. Constrained by the policies, we students may gradually overcome our bad habits and develop new good ones. For instance, we will learn to be considerate to others and mind our own duties when living together with others. Thus viewed, dormitory policies have an important part to play in the general education of our young generation.
    All in all, dormitory policies should be made because of its many advantages, immediate or long-term. Meanwhile, it is necessary to point out that policies are polices, after all. Whether we can keep our dormitories tidy and clean, or show adequate respect for each other, depends on our active compliance to the policies. For the sake of happiness and friendship, we university students should work together to make our dormitory another home of ours.

解析 第1段:交待背景引出话题:在目前形势下,大学生往往几个人合住寝室。大学生合住宿舍虽有利但也有弊。许多人认为有必要制定宿舍规定。接着,提出自己的看法,即支持这一主张。
第2段:陈述自己支持该主张的第一个理由:宿舍是公共环境,而对公共环境的管理离不开约束全体行为的规定。事实上,广场、候车厅、教室、实验室、图书馆、阅览室都有此类规定。
第3段:陈述第二个理由:制定宿舍规定可以方便宿舍成员之间相互约束和监督。由于宿舍规定是大家共同约定的,按规定提醒或劝止不良行为就可收到很好的效果而又最大程度地避免情感冲突或人际矛盾。
第4段:陈述第三个理由:通过长期执行宿舍规定,大学生可以逐步养成良好生活习惯,如学会体贴别人,爱护和维护公共卫生,等等。
第5段:总结上文,得出结论,即大学生宿舍应该制订切实有效的规定。同时指出,这些规定只是明确大学生在宿舍里的行为规范,但能否真正使得宿舍秩序井然,同学友好相处,最终还得靠大学生自觉执行这些规定。鉴于为校电台写稿,最后不妨发出呼吁。
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