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Nowadays the sponsorship fee has been an open secret. To send the child to a
Nowadays the sponsorship fee has been an open secret. To send the child to a
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2023-12-07
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Nowadays the sponsorship fee has been an open secret. To send the child to an ideal school or even a kindergarten, most parents pay the sponsorship fee or even the fee for electing a school. What do you think is ONE of the major problems that result from the sponsorship fee? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic given below.
One Major Problem Resulting from the Sponsorship Fee
In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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One Major Problem Resulting from the Sponsorship Fee
Nowadays we often hear or see that besides what’s stipulated by the Compulsory Education Law, some parents pay additional fees such as the sponsorship fee or even the fee for electing a school in order to send their children to an ideal school or even a kindergarten. Although this widespread practice is [1] brought to light over and over again by a variety of media, it [2] is here to stay. Most parents hold that if their children cannot attend a good primary school, they cannot attend a good secondary school, let alone a good college or university, so they would gladly pay all kinds of fees so long as their children get a good start. On the other hand, schools [3] with an enviable reputation are even more [4] willing to charge some fees since they need sums of money to keep their good reputation, retain their first-rate teachers, extend the school building and [5] so forth. Although both parents and schools seem to be able to [6] justify themselves, one major problem arises from the sponsorship fee.
[7] In a broad sense, the phenomenon would lead to social injustice. Let me put it in this way. The additional and arbitrary charges would render educational resources more and more unbalanced — more and more funds and qualified teachers would flow into famous schools and ordinary schools would lag far behind, the inevitable and immediate consequence [8] of which would be that famous schools would attract more students than ordinary schools, which [9] givs birth to the so-called [10] Matthew Effect: the strong get stronger and the weak get weaker. It is unfair for the ordinary schools. On the other hand, parents who cannot afford the sponsorship fee, such as rural migrant workers, have to send their children to schools that don’t charge too high, but of course have a relatively low teaching level. Therefore, compared with children born by well-to-do parents, children [11] from disadvantaged families are deprived of the right to get equal education. They are the victims of injustice.
To our delight, millions of rural students in our country are [12] exempted from paying tuitions and incidental fees during their nine-year compulsory education, but we [13] still have a long way to go before a sound education system is set up and put into practice. At present our government should put more money on education, allocate education resources reasonably and fairly, ensure the poor’s right to receive equal education and thus essentially realize social equality.
解析
[1]“揭露,公布于众”,短语运用恰当。
[2]“成为生活的一部分并持续下去”。
[3]“享有盛誉的”,enviable可换成excellent,fine等。
[4]与前一句的gladly相照应。
[5]“等等,诸如此类”,一般用于前面已列举三个例子的情况。
[6]“自圆其说”。
[7]“从广义上说”,固定短语。
[8]使用非限制性定语从句丰富文章句式。
[9]“引起,产生”,固定短语。
[10]“马太效应”, 出自圣经典故,指强者愈强弱者愈弱。
[11]与前面的born by well-to-do parents形成对比。
[12]“免除”,用语准确。
[13]“在…之前仍有很长的路要走”,表达地道。
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