Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come to know t

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问题 Travel has become part of our life.  And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience.
Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
                 TRAVEL BROADENS THE MIND
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state what the topic actually means to you.
In the second part, give one or two examples to illustrate your ideas.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.  Failure to
follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案                          Travel Broadens The Mind
  Today,many of us go travelling  every year.As a matter of fact,travel has become part of our life.Through our own experience we  have come to know the significance of travel.Above all,I think it broadens our mind in the sense that it helps us to know more about the splendour of the Chinese civilization.
  Last summer I went to visit the No.2 Nanjing Yangste Bridge Park,which boasted a focus-in view of the grand modern bridge.It attracted me a lot,but I was more deeply impressed by the exhibition of the bridge models there.The bridges in miniature ranged from the most ancient ones to the most modern ones built by the Chinese working people.Despite their age,the modelled ancient bridges were delicate in structure and nice in form.I could not help admiring our ancestors for their wisdom and feeling proud of our civilization.
  In short,travel opens our mind because it enables us to know about the history and culture of a nation.In a way,going on travels is like reading books.

解析 1.写三段,字数150字左右。时间35分钟。
2.第一段:交待你对旅游拓宽眼界的看法。第二段:给出一至两个例子来阐述所取观点。第三段:简要总结前面的讨论。
3.文体为议论文,谈自己是如何认识旅游使人开阔眼界的。
4.必须结合自己旅游的切身感受来论述。
[写作提纲]
第1段:先引出话题(如指出旅游已经成为我们生活的一部分,人们已经逐步认识到它的重要性),再提出自己对旅游的看法。
第2段:从自身经历中举例说明旅游是如何开阔人的视野的。
第3段:(用不同的语言表达方式)重申自己的观点,总结上面的讨论,并适当引申(如:旅游如读书,可增长人的见识)。
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