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The number of students carrying mobile phones is increasing. There are differ

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问题    The number of students carrying mobile phones is increasing. There are different voices toward the phenomenon. Do you think schools, including primary schools, should permit students to carry mobile phones?
    Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   Should Students Be Permitted to Carry Mobile Phones?
   You are to write in three parts:
   In the first part, state your position.
   In the second part, support your views with one or two reasons.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案                          Should Students Be Permitted to Carry Mobile Phones?
     Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones. Those who are in favor of the idea argue that they can communicate with their friends more easily. Life without a mobile would be unthinkable for most of them. However I don’t think schools, including primary schools, should permit students to carry mobile phones.
     First of all, the evidence at present suggests that there is no adverse effect of mobile phones on the general population. But if there was a susceptible group, it would be most likely to be children, because their skulls are not fully thickened and their nervous system has not fully developed.
     Second, most of the students spend most of their spare time chatting on the mobile phones. They even chat when they axe crossing the street. This is proved to be highly dangerous. What’s more, long chatting on the phone does harm to their brain, and increase theft blood pressure.
     Last, some of the students always forget to keep their mobile phones silent in class. When their phone rings, it disturbs the teacher, as well as other students. What’s more, some of the students always send text messages with mobile phones in class, and of course these students couldn’t concentrate on their lessons. So it’s hard for them to make progress in theft study.
     In a word, schools should not permit students to carry mobile phones.
解析 1．明确题目要求。Unit Four考题中的“students”，“mobile phones”是题目的关键词，考生在构思文章的时候，需要把握住“学生”这个群体，充分考虑“学生”这个群体的特点，以及手机这种特殊通讯工具对这个特殊群体的影响。
2．选择写作角度。Unit Four作文题目要求为：学生应不应该带手机? 这个题目举出了针对一个问题的两种截然相反的观点，要求考生选择支持其中一个方面。手机作为新出现的高科技通讯工具既有其不可比拟的优势，也有其必然的弊病，特别是对”学生”这个特殊群体而言。考生可以从综合的角度进行考虑，选择论述角度，来陈述、解释、支持自己的观点或倾向。
组织语言结构。专业四级作文考试要求学生能够写出一篇结构严谨，充分展开，连贯一致的文章。要求文章能充分展开，结构清晰，使用适当的解释、例证和/或细节；文章体现出一致、递进、连贯的特点；语言熟练，能使用不同的句法，合适的措辞和习语，允许出现次要的词汇或语法错误。
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