Nowadays many kids are overprotected by their parents. But is it necessary t

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问题     Nowadays many kids are overprotected by their parents. But is it necessary to do that? Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture and give your view on the issue.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     Don’t Overprotect Kids   
    In the picture, a little boy is walking pompously in the rain. His mother is holding an umbrella for him. Likewise, his father is holding an umbrella for his mother and his grandmother for his father. Not far away, his grandfather, with an umbrella in hand, is rushing to catch up with his grandmother. Under the picture, the caption reads: "Many protective umbrellas for a kid". This picture draws readers’ attention to parents’ and grandparents’ overprotection towards their kids and the harm it may cause.
    In my opinion, parents should leave some room for their kids to take care of themselves. Although it is quite understandable that parents want their kids to be safe and sound, overprotection is not beneficial to the growth and development of their kids. Kids are like flowers that need to experience the wind and rain to get stronger and survive subsequent storms. If parents build a carefree and trouble-free fantasy world for their children, these children will not grow into independent individuals who are capable of handling various difficulties in life.
    In short, it is advisable that parents know the importance of letting go and launching their kids on the journey to independence. Anyway, the outside world is the destination for kids when they grow up.

解析     这幅图片刻画了四个大人为一个小孩打伞的情景。按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,指出父母的过度保护会给孩子带来危害。   
    第二段提出个人看法:父母应该培养孩子的独立性。通过比喻花朵要经历风雨,强调孩子需要磨练。如果父母事事代办。孩子只会生活在虚幻中,长大后难以应对现实世界的各种考验。
    第三段总结全文:父母应该懂得放手,引导孩子踏上独立自主的道路。
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