Computer is a very useful tool to us. But some experts say using a computer

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问题     Computer is a very useful tool to us. But some experts say using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
    Should Young Children Use Computer Every Day?
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     Should Young Children Use Computer Every Day?
    In my extended family, all of the young children under 15 are near-sighted. When asked about the cause of near-sightedness, they all confessed that they used computer too often and too much. In light of this tragedy, I think children should not use computer every day.
    First of all, using computer too often could harm young children’s eyesight. Children’s organs are extremely sensitive and unstable. If they receive too much stimulus from the computer screens, their eyes will be affected and symptoms of near-sightedness will occur. Secondly, computers would confine young children in their rooms and deprive them of the communication between them and the outside world. It is reported that two thirds of teenagers are room-bound, and 1 in 15 of them would not leave their room during weekends, blogging. What they miss are the unique opportunities to experience different things. Youth could be better spent in traveling, taking on hobbies and many other interesting activities. These would help young children to develop into an all-round person.
    In conclusion, young children should not use computer on daily basis. They should go out and explore the infinite possibilities that life promises.

解析     本题属于“立场选择型”作文,涉及的题材是“科学技术”。该题要求考生对“小孩子是否应该每天使用电脑”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从身边小孩近视的故事入题,指出小孩不应该每天使用电脑。
    第二段:阐述原因。第一,年幼的小孩如果使用电脑太频繁会损害他们的视力;第二,电脑会把小孩限制在自己的房子里,剥夺了他们与外界交流的机会,这样不利于小孩全面发展。
    第三段:重申观点——小孩子不应该每天使用电脑。
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