The following chart shows the number and percentage of old people over 60 in

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问题     The following chart shows the number and percentage of old people over 60 in our society from 2005 to 2012. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart and give your comments.
   
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     Old Men and Society
    The chart above clearly demonstrates the changes of number and proportion of old people in our society. From 2005 to 2012, the number of old people over 60 kept increasing stably.
    We can see clearly from the chart that the number and proportion of old men in our country rose considerably and stably in eight years. There is no doubt that China will soon step into the aged society. For one thing, in the past decades, we have witnessed great development in China. The government invested more and more money into the social security of citizens and these policies effectively helped people live longer. For another, with the improvement of living standards, people begin to pay more attention to their health than ever before. Books and TV programs on health care become very popular. The increasing awareness of personal health enables old people to enjoy a healthy and happy life.
    I believe that unavoidable problems would occur when we get into the aged society. It would be a challenging task for our country to adopt appropriate measures for the old.

解析     本题为图表作文。从图中可以看出,从2005年到2012年,我国60岁以上人口的数量和比重在稳定上升。在具体行文方面,考生应首先概述图表内容;然后从两方面分析我国人口老龄化的原因;最后总结全文,提出自己的观点。
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