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  3. Some students in the university enjoy privilege, for example, student athlete

Some students in the university enjoy privilege, for example, student athlete

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问题    Some students in the university enjoy privilege, for example, student athletes could pass the examinations with lower grades; members of the choir could survive the test with poor classroom attendance. Do you agree or disagree with the privilege enjoyed by the special group of students?
   Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   Are the Privileged Students on Campus Acceptable?
   Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案    Are the Privileged Students on Campus Acceptable?
   With the popularization of quality-oriented education, college students can develop their interests and hobbies more freely. Amateur athletes, singers and hosts become the second identities of many students, who are entitled to special consideration in their studies. They can pass examinations with much lower scores. So some people say that it is not right to allow privileged students on campus. However, I don’t agree with them.
   There are many reasons why I hold a different opinion, and I would explore only a few here. The main reason why I agree with "special privileges should be enjoyed by some students" is that it is more difficult for students to be versatile in a highly competitive world, and that exam scores no longer play a key role in evaluating the achievement of a college student. So schools shouldn’t ask students to be good at both their studies and extra-curricular activities. Furthermore, a person’s time and energy are limited. For example, when student athletes are exhausted by their daily exercises, there will be little energy left for them to study. So the special consideration for them will help these students concentrate on their specialty.
   All in all, what the so-called privileges students enjoy are not privileges at all, but a kind of support and encouragement of the universities. So, the privileged students on campus are acceptable.
解析    开头部分
   首先介绍了高校特长生在学业上享受特殊待遇这一现象。然后用So some people say…直接引出一些人的反对观点。最后用However，…表明自己的态度。
   中间部分
   展开论证，用The  main reason…和Furthermore,…引出两点原因，并在分析时使用For example,…加入实例进行论证。最后用So…进行总结。
   结尾部分
   总结全文，直接回答作文标题中提出的问题。
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