With the improvement of living standards, more and more people nowadays choo

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问题     With the improvement of living standards, more and more people nowadays choose to go on holiday. They say that they usually feel completely relaxed after a good holiday. It makes them feel energetic and dynamic when they go back to work or study again. What is your opinion about going on holiday? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
    The Benefits of Going on Holiday
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
    In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案     The Benefits of Going on Holiday
    Many Chinese people are now entitled to annual leave. They take several days off and enjoy themselves on their own terms. From my perspective, I think going on holiday is a good idea.
    First of all, going on holiday will refresh us. It means you take time off from your busy schedule and immerse yourself in whatever you like. You may read a novel you have been meaning to read; you may learn to play golf and surprise your friends in the next gathering; or you may just want to stay at home and do some chores with your wife. No matter what it is, you will feel satisfied and relaxed, because you can choose to do things you enjoy. Secondly, for those who spend their holiday on traveling, they will be rewarded with a broadened horizon. For instance, they could visit the Imperial Palace and the Great Wall in the National Holiday and travel to Yunnan in the May Day holiday. Through these trips, they learn about China in the past and China in the wild. They come back home with an enlightened mind and more knowledge about the world.
    In conclusion, going on holiday should be encouraged among Chinese people, as it will ease their stress at work and help them learn something new.

解析     本题属于“给定观点型”作文,涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“度假的好处”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从中国人休年假入题,指出度假的好处。
    第二段:阐述原因。首先,度假能让我们从繁忙的工作中抽身出来,喜欢干什么就干什么,寻乐其中;其次,度假去旅游的人,其视野会得到拓展。举故宫、长城、云南为例。
    第三段:重申观点——中国人应该多去度假,这样可以减轻工作的压力,也能学到新的知识。
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