首页
登录
职称英语
What is Rachel’s extended essay about? [br] [originaltext]Dr Jones: Come in. Ah
What is Rachel’s extended essay about? [br] [originaltext]Dr Jones: Come in. Ah
游客
2023-10-18
68
管理
问题
What is Rachel’s extended essay about? [br]
Dr Jones: Come in. Ah, good morning, Rachel. Have you come to talk about your extended essay?
Rachel: That’s right, Dr Jones. Have I come at a bad time?
Dr Jones: No, not at all. This is a good time in fact.
Rachel: Good, because I wanted to ask what you think about the decision I have come to regarding the subject of my essay.
Dr Jones: Yes, you initially wanted to write about working conditions in 19th century factories but later you were contemplating looking at the conditions inside hospitals in 19th century northern towns.
Rachel: That’s right. I thought about it for a long time and weighed up the pros and cons. It took me ages to decide.
Dr Jones: Well, I think you were right to stick with your first idea. There are so many better sources available on the subject. There are plenty of articles in magazines and the odd TV and radio programmes on the other subject but everything is rather superficial: there’s no real academic knowledge to draw on.
Rachel: Yes, I found that out. I found lots of books but nothing was really helpful, even on the Internet. In the end, when I decided on the first topic I found lots of really good stuff in magazines, books and on the Internet. I have used one particular book as the major reference, and you’ll see quoted all over the place.
Dr Jones: Well, I’m glad you came to that decision . Let’s have a look at the essay now.
Rachel: What did you think? I’ve spent ages on it but I’m only about 80 percent happy with it.
Dr Jones: Well, I wouldn’t be too down about it. I think most of it is pretty good. I like the introduction which really sets out your ideas clearly. The middle needs some attention, but the end is really first rate.
Rachel: What are the areas that need more work then?
Dr Jones: The main problem lies with your analysis of the statistics. You quote all the right numbers and you’ve got lots of good tables and everything but you need to look more closely at what the numbers mean and what their implications are. Look at them again and try and explain the important parts more clearly. After that you need to have a look at your bibliography which is a bit shoddy.
Rachel: Yes, I was afraid of that. I always think that once I’ve finished the essay then I’m done and so I don’t put enough care into things like the bibliography. Still I’ve plenty of time to get that and the other stuff sorted out.
Dr Jones: You’ve plenty of time but don’t leave it until the last minute because you’ll need to check it all again carefully when you’re finished, and it would be a good idea if I looked over it again before the final submission.
Rachel: The deadline is the 28th April, so shall I get it to you on the 24th? Will that be OK?
Dr Jones: Well, that won’t leave you much time to change anything if I find anything else that needs it. How about a few days earlier than that, say April 21? I’ll be able to get it back to you the day after that.
Rachel: That sounds great. Thank you.
选项
A、The statistical analyses.
B、The essay structure.
C、The topic sentences.
答案
A
解析
关于论文需要修改的部分,Dr Jones说到“The main problem lies with your analysis ofthe statistics”,由此可知统计分析(statistical analyses)需要修改。
转载请注明原文地址:https://tihaiku.com/zcyy/3109398.html
相关试题推荐
[originaltext]M:Hey,Felicia.Doyouhavetimeforaquickconversation?W:Su
[originaltext]M:Hey,Felicia.Doyouhavetimeforaquickconversation?W:Su
[originaltext]M:Hey,Felicia.Doyouhavetimeforaquickconversation?W:Su
[originaltext]W:Hey,George,takealookatthisarticle.Itsaysseveralmajo
[originaltext]W:Hey,George,takealookatthisarticle.Itsaysseveralmajo
[originaltext]M:Taketheseasonforthousandsofnewcollegegraduatestofind
[originaltext]M:Taketheseasonforthousandsofnewcollegegraduatestofind
[originaltext]W:Frank,wejustgotoursalesfiguresinandthenumbersareve
[originaltext]W:Frank,wejustgotoursalesfiguresinandthenumbersareve
[originaltext]W:Frank,wejustgotoursalesfiguresinandthenumbersareve
随机试题
MarleneCastroknewthetallblondewomanonlyasLaurene,hermentor.Theym
Inrecentyears,atrendhasemergedinthebehavioralsciencestowardshor
Insuchachanging,complexsocietyformerlysimplesolutionstoinformation
A.右半结肠切除术 B.部分结肠切除术 C.经内镜切除术 D.全结肠切除术
A.硝苯地平 B.氢氯噻嗪和普萘洛尔 C.β受体阻断剂 D.尼莫地平 E
风湿病可引起A.皮下结节 B.动脉炎 C.小舞蹈症 D.环形红斑
下列哪项不是输血的适应证? A.贫血B.低蛋白血症C.血友病甲D.
债券指数化投资策略的目标是使债券投资组合的收益()A:与某个特定指数的收益相同
A.续断 B.紫河车 C.菟丝子 D.何首乌 E.益智仁温肾补精,益气养
在其他条件相同的情况下,下列关于公司股利政策的说法中,正确的有()。A.拥有控制
最新回复
(
0
)