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For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than
For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than
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For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words, whose title is Turn off your Mobile Phone. Remember your composition must be written according to the following outline. Write your composition on the Composition Sheet in Test Paper Two.
Outline:
1.移动电话给我们的生活带来的利与弊。
2.在某些场合请关掉你的手机。
Words for reference:
convenient, advantages, contact and communicate, interrupt people
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答案
Turn off your Mobile Phone
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are using mobile phones, for they bring our lives various advantages. First, they are convenient to bring and easy for people to contact and communicate with others. Second, most of mobile phones have the function of playing MP3, which enables people to enjoy music everywhere. Third, people can even play some electronic games on the mobile phone.
It is true that the mobile phone has lots of benefits, but the chief disadvantages are as follows. People using a mobile phone usually have to pay a big phone bill every month; noisy ringing and loud speaking often interrupt other’s work.
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that it is advisable to turn off the mobile phone on the following occasions: learning in the classroom, attending a conference, and seeing a movie in the cinema.
解析
该范文共计144个英文单词,明显达到三级考试对字数的要求。从结构上看,该考生将原来的两点提纲要点分成三段来写,属于合理调整,展现出考生的较高水平。从论证上看,理由和例子典型、充分,并且陈述有序。从语言表达上看,该范文使用了全部参考词汇,并且使用了其他较好词汇;同时长短句结合,并使用了并列句、定语从句、同位语从句等。该范文属于高分甚至满分档次。
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