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  3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay ent

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay ent

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Left-behind Children in the Countryside. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 留守儿童的现象在农村非常普遍
2. 这种现象带来的弊端
3. 我诊断该如何时处理这些问题
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答案                             Left-behind Children in the Countryside
    Every year, millions of people from rural areas ①pour into cities to find jobs. ①And the phenomenon of left-behind children is prevalent.
    ②Left-behind children are suffering a series of problems. They are not taken good care of by their parents because of the distance. Therefore, many of them are rather weak physically and psychologically. Besides, they are easily led astray due to the absence of parental love and guidance.
    ③In my opinion, measures should be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, both people in the Cities and countryside should endeavor to offer love and concern to these children. The parents in particular should not make money③at the sacrifice of ignorance of their children. Secondly, policies should be implemented so that children from countryside can also ③have access to educational opportunities, medical care and other services in the city. Finally, it is urgent to develop economy in the rural areas, so that people can get well-paid jobs near their homes.
解析 [写作点拨] ①审题及布局。根据提纲，这篇作文的第一段阐述现象，第二段阐明此现象的弊端，第三段提出解决办法。这三个部分的论述要有侧重点，我们可以把重点放在第二段或第三段。第一段阐明留守儿童现象是随着大批进城务工者的出现而出现的。第二段阐述留守儿童所遭遇的问题：缺少父母的关爱，他们的身心都很有可能得不到健康的发展。第三段可以根据弊端的根源即缺少关爱人手，提出一系列建议，让他们感受到关爱，得以健康成长。②语言。这篇文章讨论的是当前的情况，用一般现在时即可。在第二、三段的论述中，为了达到表意清晰，逻辑性强，要使用各种关联词，同时注意用词的鲜明、准确。
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