For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled About K

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问题 For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled About Keeping Indoors You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
   1. 目前很多年轻人大部分时间喜欢“宅”在家里,很少外出进行户外活动
   2. 对这种做法有人表示支持,也有人并不赞成
   3. 我的观点  

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答案 ①Have you ever been surprised by the trend that more and more youngsters choose to slay indoors to spend the majority of their spare time either playing cyber games. watching flints or TV programs?
   ②Those who support this means of killing time hold that staying indoors can make one fully relaxed. without worrying about issues like security. ③What’s more,this is the most economical means of spending one’s spare time. ①Others,however,sustain that staying indoors will do a sea of harm to one’s physical and spiritual fitness. ⑤But for outdoor activities of all sorts. we would not secure our body health and may be detached from the actual world.  
   ⑥Personally.I am against this trend in that as a youngster, to get exposed to the sunshine and get close contact with this colorful world is not only necessary but also indispensable for our healthy development.⑦Instead of staying indoors being engaged in the cyber world.I’d prefer to get involved in and be part of the vivid social life.

解析    ①疑问句引出话题,分词结构either playing cyber games or watching films and TV programs,举例说明“宅”在家里的方式。
   ②用引出一方观点的常用结构,指出有人认为“宅”在家里对安全有利。
   ③分析“宅”在家里的好处之二:比较省钱,economical和means都为高分词。
   ④Others,however,sustain that…可以用作引出反方观点的同定结构。
   ⑤But for与would not搭配,使用了虚拟语气,强调了户外活动的重要意义。
   ⑥提出个人观点:to get exposed to和get close contact with都表示接触,是高分词组。
⑦表明自己的做法:积极参与社会活动,努力成为社会生活的一部分,Instead of和prefer to均为亮点短语。
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