1. 现在越来越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交流的主要渠道2. 使用手机雉的利与弊3. 我的观点

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问题 1. 现在越来越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交流的主要渠道
2. 使用手机雉的利与弊
3. 我的观点
                                       My Viewpoint on Wide-spread SMS

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答案                               My Viewpoint on Wide-spread SMS
   ①Nowadays, more and more young people have joined the clan of thumbs. They use SMS as their major communication channel. ② It is also reported that SMS is the most frequently used function for the mobile phone users in China apart from making calls.
   ③SMS has brought us many advantages. Firstly, with the tip of your finger, messages with words, digital pictures and music can be sent to another user within seconds. What’s more, you can send one message to many users without rewriting it Secondly, compared with making calls, SMS is much cheaper because the provider charges only 0.1 ¥ per message ④However, short messages disturb our life sometimes. Garbage messages are quite annoying, and there are an increasing number of victims who have been cheated or fooled by them.
   ⑤As for me, I prefer using this way of communication, it gives me much convenience to my daily life. But I also hope some measures should be taken to punish those spreading garbage messages so that we can enjoy the modern information technology safely

解析 ①审题及布局。这是一篇比较典型的提纲式作文。按照文章提示的要求,首先应该对越来越多的年轻人把手机短信作为交流的主要渠道这一现象进行简单介绍,然后说明使用手机短信的利与弊,最后表明自己的观点,即喜欢这种交流方式与否。在布局上,根据题目中给出的提纲来展开,采用三段式的结构即可。第一段介绍这种现象;第二段说明使用短信交流的利弊,应该注意根据自己的观点事先安排说明利弊的比重,即如果认为利大于弊,就应该多说明益处,反之亦然;第三段陈述自己的观点。②语言。本文是一篇论说文,论说要层次分明,语言简洁流畅,尽量避免重复使用同一句式或词汇,以增加文采。时态上采用一般现在时即可。
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