For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Personalise

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Personalised Online Services. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words, and base your essay on the chart and the outline given below:
某中型城市网络个性化服务交易情况:
1)网络个性化服务在大中城市越来越流行。网络个性化服务,即:顾客把求购商品的信息(如:大小、颜色、样式等)通过网络发送给生产厂家,由生产厂家根据顾客的要求生产出产品,然后通过邮局邮寄给顾客。
2)解释网络个性化服务流行的原因:
3)“我”的看法。

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答案     According to the chart, we clearly learn that personalised online services are more and more popular among people. As early as in 2006. we could seldom see any signs of personalised online services in a middle-sized city. Then 6 years later, the turnover of personalised online services in this middle-sized city had soared sharply to almost 100 million.(描述图表段)
    There are many reasons accounting for the tremendous growth of personalised online services. Firstly, the personalised online services emphasise on meeting the customers’ individual needs. This kind of service will surely win the popularity in a society where more and more people attach vital importance to their personal preferences. Secondly, the personalised online service is convenient and time-saving. Finally, as a new business, the personalised online service caters for the fashion, and therefore it attracts a large number of young people.(说明原因段)
    As far as I am concerned, the personalised online service is a promising business. For one thing, the ever-developing science and technology will cut down the cost of e-commerce, thus making the personalised online service more affordable for a wider range of consumers. For another, the convenience of the Internet and the popularity of individuality will attract more people to choose personalised services. To conclude, personalised online services will have greater development space and become an important part in our life in the near future.(阐述观点段)

解析 本题属于提纲式图表命题作文。提纲第l点要求描述图表中反映的现象,提纲第2点要求解释这种现象流行的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈个人看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文,写作的重点是对图表中数据的描述和对其所反映现象的原因的分析。
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