For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark "Prevention is better than cure". You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案     That prevention is better than cure has been generally accepted. It tells us that we should plan everything ahead and prepare for the unexpected and anticipate trouble in advance. The truth of it is self-evident.(提出观点段)
    Many remarkable examples account for this argument. A case in point is preparing houses against a rainy day. This is close to suggest the importance of preventing troubles from happening is better than finding solutions to them after their occurrence. For another example, every time before a terrible weather change, the National Meteorological Centre will issue an alert to warn people against possible danger. Moreover, people who pay great attention to their healtii are less likely to contract incurable diseases.(论证观点段)
    Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that planning ahead is better than locking the barn door after the horse is stolen. But what is worth noting is that the preparation should be moderately, or we may become alarmists. To conclude, an ounce of prevention beats a pound of cure.(总结观点段)

解析 本篇是评论性话题作文。文章要求评论“与其补救于已然.不如防患于未然”(Prevention is better than cure)这一观点,题目含义清晰,考生不易跑题,这方面的例子很多,相关的成语也很多,如:“未雨绸缪”、“亡羊补牢”等,都可以用上为文章添彩。文章展开的时候把重点放在“防患于未然”的优点上,因此本文属于观点论证型作文。
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