For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Improve

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Improvement of Life in a Rural Family in China. Your essay should start with a brief description of the table. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案     The Improvement of Life in a Rural Family in China
    Great changes have taken place in a Chinese rural family from 2007 to 2012. The average monthly income of a rural family increases from 253 yuan in 2007 to 480 yuan in 2012. Since this is a sizable increase, rural residents’ consumption expenditures are also changing.
    Rural residents in 2012 spend more money on clothing and housing, especially on articles for daily use, and less on food, which shows a rapid rise in their material living standard. They are not satisfied with the previous living conditions any more. They desire to live a more comfortable and better-off life.
    However, the amount of money they spend on entertainment has a little change, only from 2% to 3% of the total income, which indicates either rural residents attach little importance to their cultural life or enjoying a play or film is regarded as a special treat because there are few theaters and cinemas in the area. So local governments should provide more chances of entertainment, and help to improve their cultural background.

解析     第一段通过分析某农村家庭2007年和2012年两年的月平均收入,概括描述了表格所体现的变化。最后一句承上启下,指出不仅收入增长,消费方式也发生了明显变化。
    第二段指出该家庭在服饰、房屋、日用品方面的支出呈上升趋势,而在食物方面的支出呈下降趋势,说明随着收入增加,农民过上了更为舒适幸福的生活。
    第三段开头用However转折,指出表格内容显示该家庭娱乐消费增长缓慢,这表明农民仍旧缺乏文化娱乐生活,并分析其原因为农村地区缺少影院、戏院等文化娱乐场所,由此提出改进措施,即地方政府应该为农民提供更多的机会享受文化娱乐活动。首句是一个非常复杂的长句,其中主句为the amount of money has a little change,而they spend on entertainment为定语从句,修饰先行词money;only from 2%to 3%of the total income补充说明change的具体内容;which引导的非限制性定语从句修饰前面的整个句子,其中indicates后面的宾语部分为由either...or…连接的两个并列成分的宾语。
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