For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Choice of Career. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.一些大学生认为职业选择应该以符合兴趣为出发点
    2.也有大学生认为应该看是否有好的发展前景
    3.我的观点

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答案     On the Choice of Career
    In recent years, there is no consensus among college students about the choice of career. Some students are in favor of the view that when choosing a job, interest plays the key part and should be the first priority, while others take a completely different side, firmly believing that career prospects are more worthwhile.
    Students holding the first view think that interest will contribute to more happiness and satisfaction at work, with which they could work in a more relaxing way and make progress more easily. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression for lack of interest. However, supporters of the second view argue that one should pay more attention to career prospects while making a choice, which will surely lead to better development of a person himself sooner or later. Therefore, they believe that it is career prospects that count most.
    Personally, I deem that career prospects are the right element to think about because they can bring about one’s success both in career and in life. In this sense, only career prospects can bring a person happiness and satisfaction in the long run.

解析     第一段提出职业选择问题,指出大学生对此问题有不同的观点和态度。第二句中第一个连词that引导同位语从句,解释说明view的内容;后面由连词while引起对比,并使用believing引导的分词结构作伴随状语。
    第二段对两种不同的观点进行分析。第一种认为大学生择业应该以兴趣为出发点,因为这样可以在工作中获得更多的愉悦和满足感;第二种认为职业选择应该更注重发展前景,理由是有前景的工作可以使个人有更好的发展。末句使用了六级写作加分句型——强调句,句子结构为“Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其余部分”。例如:It is my parents who have put so muchpressure on me.(给我施加如此多压力的人是我的父母。)
    第三段阐述自己的观点,提出职业前景应该是职业选择中更被重视的内容,因为从长远来看,只有具有职业前景的工作才能给人带来幸福感和满足感。末句为only引导的部分倒装结构,为六级写作亮点句型。
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