For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Wealth

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.每个人都想获得财富,似乎财富就是幸福
    2.幸福并不等同于财富,很多东西是无法用财富换得的
    3.我的观点

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答案     Wealth and Happiness
    There are many factors that contribute to one’s happiness. However, currently many people equate wealth with happiness and work hard for it. In the whirlpool of wealth and vanity, I believe possessing money does not mean owning happiness. And several reasons may account for this.
    The first reason is that components of happiness, such as health, friendship and true love, can never be bought with money. Another reason is that attaching too much importance to wealth sometimes has harmful effects on our relationships with others. Finally, those who just try their best to make money can’t realize the true meaning of life and will become a slave of money, which prevents them from enjoying real happiness.
    In short, I believe that on the one hand, life may become awful and terrible with little money; on the other hand, life will not be joyful and happy only with a large amount of wealth. Real happiness is probably a kind of feeling deep down, which in no way can be measured by money.

解析     第一段指出,许多东西可以带来幸福,可是现在很多人却把幸福等同于拥有金钱。紧接着作者点明自己的观点:两者不能等同。
    第二段从三个方面阐述幸福并不等同于财富的原因。首先,健康、友谊、真爱等幸福要素是金钱买不到的;其次,过于看重财富会给人际关系带来危害;再次,把心思都放在金钱上的人会成为钱财的奴隶,他们无法体会到生活的真正意义,因此也很难体会到幸福的真谛。末句中包含了who引导的定语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句,以及and连接的并列分句,使得整个句子层次清晰,条理分明。
    最后一段阐述自己的观点:金钱本身并不能带来幸福,真正的幸福来源于内心深处的感受,这是无法用金钱衡量的。
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