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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Spring

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Spring

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Spring Festival Gala on CCTV. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会；
2. 有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会；
3. 在我看来……
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答案     [1] The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of China’s most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year. [2] However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.
    [3] People in increasing ambers choose not to watch the show. [4] They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modem celebrations. [5] However, some other people are faithful audience of it. [6] They argue that the Evening Gala has somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s. [7] What’s more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them.
    [8] Though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I myself enjoy watching the show with my family. [9] Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation. the organizing committee should develop a program more ex citing, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones. [10] For example, it’s a good idea to invite some big names in China’s film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.
解析     这是一篇典型的评论型作文，是四六级作文的经典题型。题目要求考生对有关春节联欢晚会的争议提出自己的看法。
    根据题目要求，文章的结构如下：
    第一段简单介绍春节联欢晚会及其影响力。
    第二段阐述人们对春节联欢晚会的不同观点；
    1．有的人建议取消春节联欢晚会，原因是……
    2．有的人喜欢观看春节联欢晚会，原因是……
    第三段提出自己的观点和对春节联欢晚会的一点建议。

[1] 过去分词作非限制性后置定语，句式简洁。
[2] 用“the show”作主语，句式灵活。 lose one’s appeal是语言亮点，意为“失去吸引力。”
[3][6] 引出争议双方观点的经典结构。
[4] give way to是语言亮点，意为“让路，让步”
[6] somewhat起到了很好的缓和语气的作用。
[7] 用What’s more引出进一步的理由，衔接自然。
[8] 提出自己观点的经典句型。
[9] 不定式结构表目的．表达简洁清楚。 [10] 用For example引出具体建议。big names意为“知名人士”。
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