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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Int
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Int
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Internet Celebrities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1. 近年来出现了大量因不同原因而出名的网络名人
2.有人认为这是网络时代的进步,有人认为他们的出现是一种退步
3.你的看法
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On Internet Celebrities
[1]In recent years a variety of Internet celebrities have emerged with different stories.[2]Some folks consider it a cultural progress in this network era while some hold the opposite opinion.[3] I prefer to agree that this phenomenon is a progress.
[4]First,the emergence of those celebrities represents the free expression of new ideas,either creative or queer.
[5]New idea is a very important aspect in the development of this fast-moving world.[6]Second,the society’s acceptance to the celebrities indicates that we are more open-minded and willing to take in new stuff than before.[7]With more new ideas and open-minded sense, we are able to create an all-round diversified society.
[8]All in all,the emergence of Internet celebrities,to some extent,is our progress in developing a more diversifted society.
解析
[1]提出现象,对应提纲中的第1点。with different stories说明了网络名人出名的原因和过程的不同,stories用得正好,比用reasons地道。
[2]用转折词while指出两种不同的看法,consider和hold的交替使用让用词不显单调。the opposite opinion概括性强,使行文简洁。
[3]明确提出自己的观点,引出下文的重点阐述。prefer to…用语地道,优于think等。
[4][5][6][7]First...Second...从“新思想的表达” 和“社会文化的多样性”这两个角度沦证。使用fast-moving,open-minded,all-round等复合词,使表达简洁、地道。queer“奇怪的;诡异的”,是亮点词汇。
[7]with+名词为亮点句型,表明在前面两点的铺垫下,自然得出的结果。
[8]用All in all总结全文。其中to some extent留有余地,使观点不偏激不绝对。
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