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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about Too Much Expen
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about Too Much Expen
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2023-07-23
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about Too Much Expenditure on Fashion. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 目前很多大学生在追求时尚方面花费太多
2. 我的个人看法
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答案
Too Much Expenditure on Fashion
[1]The ever-changing fashion mirrors the advance of human civilization. [2]And the desire for beauty and fashion is blameless. [3]However, some college students dip into their purses [4]in order to keep up with Joneses. Some of them even cut down the [5]expending for books and meals to satisfy their desire for fashionable dress.
[6]As far as I am concerned, college students should cherish ambitions rather than become slaves of fashion. [7] Attention should be paid to the disadvantages of the blinded following of fashion. [8]Firstly, the pursuit of fashion has made many college students get lost. Some of them even fail to focus on their study. [9]Besides, it is a costly hobby to follow the tide, which will [10]impose financial stresses on their parents.
[11]All in all, [12]we should adopt a more reasonable attitude towards the pursuit of fashion.
解析
[1][2]对于不能全盘否定的事物,比较恰当的写法是在批驳极端行为之前,先论述其合理性。
[3]用However引出极端盲目地追求时尚的现象。
[5]用具体实例说明某些大学生的盲从行为。
[6]用As far as I am concerned引出个人观点。此句为主题句。
[8][9]用Firstly和Besides体现论述层次。
[10]用impose一词加强语气,强调盲目追求时尚给父母造成的压力。
[11]用All in all简要总结。
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