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  3. 1. 现在有许多大学生沉溺于网络游戏；2．沉溺于网络游戏给大学生带来的影响；3．建议大家远离这种消遣方式。 Stepping Aw

1. 现在有许多大学生沉溺于网络游戏；2．沉溺于网络游戏给大学生带来的影响；3．建议大家远离这种消遣方式。 Stepping Aw

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问题 1. 现在有许多大学生沉溺于网络游戏；
2．沉溺于网络游戏给大学生带来的影响；
3．建议大家远离这种消遣方式。
             Stepping Away from Online Games
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答案                                                          Stepping Away from Online Games
   ① Nowadays, more and more college students are addicted to online games. Those games may be funny and exciting, but are very harmful to those addicts.
   ② In my opinion, there are many disadvantages of game addiction. Firstly, online games take up a lot of players’ time for study. Many of the addicts found themselves forced to drop out of school for poor academic performance. Secondly, addicts tend to isolate themselves from the reality. What’s worse, indulging in the virtual world for a long time, they are more liable to suffer mental problem and physical collapse. Thirdly, players are exposed to too much violent and unhealthy material, which is definitely harmful to their growth.
   ③ In short, I cannot see any benefits from online games. Study should be the primary concern of college students. Therefore, I do hope they can step away from online games.
解析    ①审题及布局。从文章的要求上看，应该首先对题目讨论的现象作总的陈述，即现在有许多大学生沉溺于网络游戏，随后分析网络游戏给大学生带来的影响，最后推导出主题；建议大家远离这种消遣方式。在布局上，根据题目中给出的提纲来展开即可。第一段介绍许多大学生沉溺于网络游戏这种现象；第二段阐述沉溺于网络游戏给大学生所带来的负面影响；第三段陈述自己对这一现象的看法，呼吁大家远离网络游戏。②语言。本文是一篇论说文[考频：9]，通过分析网络游戏的弊端，呼吁大家远离网络游戏，所以论述要重点突出，层次分明，具有说服力，词汇选择要精准，句式丰富一些。时态上选择一般现在时即可。
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    Nowadays, more and more college students are addicted to ______, ______ may be funny and exciting, but are very harmful to ______.
   In my opinion, there are many disadvantages of ______. Firstly, ______, ______. Secondly, ______. What’s worse, indulging in ______, they are more liable to suffer ______. Thirdly, ______, which is definitely harmful to their growth.
   In short, I cannot see any benefits from ______. Study should be the primary concern of college students. Therefore, I do hope they can step away from ______.
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